Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Trying my hand at poetry

A Manifesto on Life:
The Cactus

The snow falls                    
outside on the hill;            
tiny crystals                        
float here and there.         
In a window, the cactus stands            
as tall and proud as it possibly can.    
Prickled and green, rigid and still,   
it cares not for that snow on the hill.  

Days go by
and the snow melts.
The sun shines bright
a warmth unfelt
by the cactus, prickled and green.
A desire for more remains to be seen
for the cactus,  all alone
upon the sill it forever calls home.

The life of                    
a cactus so grand          
may be for some            
the perfect stance.         
As for me, I prefer the sky,          
the cold world of danger that reigns outside.   
Cruel may be the struggle of man      
But with it comes love, hope, and a helping hand. 

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

And it is a good hand...I've been seeing the struggle of man up close lately, plus the love, hope, and those saints that help ease the struggle. I read this as an expanded deeper take on "Is better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all". Very good. M

Anonymous said...

Interesting to know.